Fantastic Four #141 (December, 1973)

Hard times at the Baxter Building.  Bleak House.  Heartbreak Hotel.  Is life not ironic?  If nothing else?  As Annihilus remarked back in issue #140.  Love and work had come between the Fantastic Four, America’s greatest superheroes.  For almost a year — a year in real time, a year in Paul Hood’s whirlpool teens, but a few days, no more, in the motionless, imperceptible time of Marvel comics — Sue Richards, née Storm, the Invisible Girl, had been estranged from her husband, Reed Richards.  With Franklin, their mysteriously equipped son, she was in seclusion in the country.  She would return only when Reed learned to understand the obligations of family, those paramount bonds that lay beneath the surface of his work.  In her stead, the Medusa had joined the Fantastic Four.  Medusa: Tibetan-born Inhuman and cousin of Johnny Storm’s paramour, Crystal, the Elemental…

The mood in the Baxter Building was grim.  Besides the Richards’s marital problems, Crystal had recently chosen to marry Quicksilver instead of Johnny Storm.  Sue was worried about Franklin’s trances; Reed was worried about Sue; Johnny was worried about Crystal; Ben Grimm was worried about himself.

It was a good period for readers of the F.F….

— from Rick Moody’s 1994 novel The Ice Storm.

That’s not at all a bad synopsis of what had been going on in “The World’s Greatest Comic Magazine” in the months prior to the release of the issue that’s our primary topic today.  Indeed, your humble blogger must confess he’s been tempted to simply go with the take that’s been provided here by Paul Hood — the fictional teenage comics fan who’s one of the principal characters of The Ice Storm — and jump right on in to, if not FF #141 itself, then at least the issue immediately previous to it.  In the end, however, I’ve come to feel that any discussion of the concluding chapters of this storyline — probably the most memorable of this whole era of Fantastic Four — will suffer for not having the key events leading up to them laid out in somewhat more detail.  After all, even if you read these comics back in the day as I did, I can hardly expect you to remember them as vividly after half a century as Paul Hood does after only a few months in his “whirlpool teens”.

Tobey Maguire as Paul Hood in Ang Lee’s 1997 film adaptation of The Ice Storm.  (Yes, that’s a copy of Fantastic Four #141 he’s reading.)

And so, we’re going to begin not with FF #141, or even #140 — or even the last couple of issues we looked at in depth here on the blog, back in November of last year — but with FF #127 (Oct., 1972).  In doing so, we’ll be covering a bit of the same ground we did in that earlier post, but with a different emphasis this time.  Also, we’ll generally be paying fairly short shrift to the main or “A” plotlines of these issues, since our concern is not so much with the villain-of-the-month (at least, not until we get to the month of August, 1973), as with the interpersonal dramas involving the main cast — the series of mostly domestic events that will lead inexorably to the shocking family calamity with which the story ends.

Fantastic Four #127 was written by Roy Thomas, with art by the team of John Buscema and Joe Sinnott (who are also responsible for the rest of the artwork included in this post, save as noted).  In it, Thomas picked up on a hint of marital discord between Reed and Sue Richards, aka Mister Fantastic and the Invisible Girl, that his predecessor (not to mention the FF’s co-creator and original writer) Stan Lee had dropped all the way back in issue #107 (Feb., 1971) but never really followed up on.*  We join the narrative in medias res, as Johnny Storm, the Human Torch, waits impatiently for his sister and brother-in-law to show up so that they can descend into the bowels of the Earth to rescue the Thing from the Mole Man:

Naturally, the FF put aside their squabbling long enough to take care of business down below — an adventure which continues through #128 — but no sooner has the full team returned to the Baxter Building in New York (at the beginning of #129) than Johnny announces that he’s immediately leaving for the Great Refuge, so that he can be with his beloved Crystal.  Johnny’s departure is then quickly followed by another event which will cause the team to separate further, if only temporarily: an urgent call (placed via mystical vision) from Agatha Harkness, the governess of Reed and Sue’s young son, Franklin (and also a practicing witch)…

It’s possible that Roy Thomas had a plan to explore the mystery behind Miss Harkness’ sudden demand for the Richards to come get their kid; however clichéd her “I can say no more!” line might be, it’s still undeniably portentous.  But he never came back to it before leaving the book (with #133), and his successor, Gerry Conway, opted to introduce a brand new, evidently unrelated mystery involving the sorceress rather than follow up on this one.  So, at least as far as we readers are concerned, it might as well have been about nothing more than “a red-hot mah-jongg match”, as suggested by Ben Grimm.

Ben decides to go for a walk — an entirely ordinary and mundane sort of thing to do which nevertheless ends with him fighting, and being defeated by, the Frightful Four.  The story continues into #130 (with the same creative team still on board), where we get a glimpse of Reed’s seemingly all-important “work in the lab“, as well as a look into his thoughts…

As it turns out, the elevator contains none of the above (though Reed comes closest with his joke about Dr. Doom) — rather, it’s the home-invading Frightful Four, with a captive and unconscious Thing in tow.  Very soon thereafter, the Invisible Girl returns from Whisper Hill with Franklin, just in time to enter the fray.  At one point, it seems that the tide might turn in our ambushed heroes’ favor when the Thing finally returns to consciousness — an occurrence which young Franklin seems to have something to do with, somehow (though no one seems to notice)…

But not even the might of an awakened and freed Ben Grimm — not to mention the aid of former Frightful Four-er Medusa — seems to be enough to put the Wizard, Sandman, Trapster, and Thundra (Medusa’s replacement) decisively away.  Or, at least, it’s not happening quickly enough for Mister Fantastic…

In the end, the Frightful Four manage to make their getaway, leaving behind wreckage of more than one kind…

In the next two issues, Reed and Ben travel to the Great Refuge at the invitation of Medusa, where they’re reunited with Johnny and become involved with the revolt of the Inhumans’ genetically engineered slave race, the Alpha Primitives.  At the conclusion of that adventure (which we covered in detail in November), Johnny accepts that Crystal now loves another man — the speedy sometime-Avenger named Quicksilver — and resolves to return to New York with his teammates… as does Medusa, who offers to fill in for the Invisible Girl until she returns (as everyone seems to assume she will, sooner rather than later).

The following issue, #133, is a one-off, featuring a rematch between the Thing and Thundra; it’s also the last (at least for a while) to include an authorial contribution from Roy Thomas, who only plots it, while Gerry Conway handles the final script.  Then, with issue #134, Conway takes the steering wheel all on his own:

We never learn the nature of the specific “experiment” concerning Reed in this issue — perhaps it’s connected to what he was working on back in #129, perhaps not — though, either way, he’ll have reason soon enough to regret not following up on the disappearance of Agatha Harkness more promptly.

Meanwhile, Sue Richards has gone to stay with old friends of hers, Carol and Bob Landers, who live on a farm in Pennsylvania.  Both she and Franklin seem to have settled in well…

Um, that’s not the least bit ominous.  Nope.

The bulk of this issue, as well as the following one, involve a scheme against the Fantastic Four by an old foe, Gregory Gideon — who, aided by another sometime FF adversary, the android called Dragon Man, kidnaps Sue and Franklin.  Alerted by the Landers, Reed takes the Fantasti-Car and flies to their rescue, followed quickly thereafter by Ben, Medusa, and Johnny.  Soon, all of them are captured as well; but though the team ultimately free themselves and triumph over their captors, the tale’s conclusion doesn’t bring the joyous family reunion one might have hoped for (if not necessarily expected)…

Aw, nuts (as Ben might say).

With the next two issues, #136-137, Roy Thomas takes a break from his duties as Marvel’s editor-in-chief for long enough to plot a two-parter inspired by the popular culture of the 1950s; Gerry Conway again delivers the final script.  However, as the series’ ongoing subplots advance not a whit during either issue, we’re going to skip ahead to #138, where Conway returns as the book’s sole writer.

This issue features the return of the FF’s old friend and ally Wyatt Wingfoot, who comes to the Baxter Building to invite them all to attend his college graduation — and then, to do him the favor of accompanying him to his people’s reservation in Oklahoma, where he suspects trouble is brewing…

A little while later, Reed sees the others off…

Hmm, what’s this about “responsibility”?  Is there more to Reed’s recent experiments than just his normal drive towards scientific discovery?

At this point, the story turns to the “A” plot, involving the nefarious doings of the Miracle Man on Oklahoma’s Keewazi reservation; that adventure continues into #139, so we don’t get another chance to check in on Mister Fantastic — or the Invisible Girl, for that matter — until about halfway through that issue:

All right?  I don’t want to second-guess Sue, but I think maybe she’s trying a little too hard to convince herself here.

Issue #139 ends with the decisive defeat of the Miracle Man, followed by a two-panel tease for #140:

And that brings us at last to issue #140, in which not only the question of who’s on the other side of the door to the Negative Zone is answered (actually, the cover by Rich Buckler and Frank Giacoia pretty much gives that away before one even opens the book), but we also see the background subplots we’ve been following for approximately the last year’s worth of issues move firmly into the foreground.

Several decades after this issue’s publication, Gerry Conway was quoted thusly in an article about the FF in the 1970s that ran in Back Issue #74 (Aug., 2014):

Those two Annihilus issues [#140-141] were the only two issues of Fantastic Four that I actually scripted in advance…  They were kind of rare. I wrote them as full scripts and even did sort-of-like little thumbnail layouts for the first issue — just for the heck of it.

I’m mentioning this, not because I think that the change in Conway’s writing process is necessarily evident in these stories as published (as we’ll see presently, there are a number of problems to be found in both; however, there’s no way to know how, or even if, things would have gone differently had the author used his more customary method of plotting first, then producing the final script after the story was drawn) — but because his impulse to try an other-than-usual approach here (which he characterizes as having been “just for the heck of it”) may have been (if only subconsciously) born of a sense that the bringing the dual plotlines of the Richards’ separation and their child’s burgeoning superpowers (both of which were actually initiated prior to his tenure on the book) to their ultimately traumatic culmination called for him to handle the material with a different kind — if not necessarily a greater amount — of care.  It’s something to think about, anyway.

Meanwhile, back at the Baxter Building, Reed Richards has yet to notice the red warning light going off above the Negative Zone door, which kind of makes you wonder what the point of installing it was.  Granted, the man does seem to have his hands full at the moment…

Sue’s vacation is over indeed, for as she drives up the highway towards home, she finds that some outside force has taken control of her car.  As the vehicle lurches off the road and into a wooded area, all she can think to do is generate a force-bubble to shield herself and Franklin, and then wait to see what happens next…

Meanwhile, Reed and the others are on their way to the Landers farm, though they’re delayed by several hours when they’re dragged in for a guest appearance in another Marvel title (Sub-Mariner #67, for the record).  Finally, however, they’re approaching their destination, and Ben tells Reed he’s sorry about how Medusa clobbered him with a wrench earlier; Reed ruefully admits that he may have had it coming…

The team quickly tracks Sue’s car to where it lies abandoned in the woods…

Is Reed’s remark about “charred ground” a reference to the crater left at Whisper Hill back in FF #134?  If so, then I imagine he’s really kicking himself right now for blowing off Agatha Harkness’ disappearance at that time…

Annihilus appears to be well-prepared to take on the whole team.  His second blow leaves the Thing unconscious, and a blast from his Cosmic Control Rod downs the Torch.  Mr. Fantastic and Medusa attempt a gambit with a “wind bomb“; it has little effect on the lord of the Negative Zone, who promptly retaliates:

Oh, right… I almost forgot that Wyatt Wingfoot was still hanging around.  Alas, the poor guy’s coming to at this particular moment means that he gets to be an audience of one as Annihilus spends most of the rest of the issue recounting his origin story — a narrative which takes up over five pages, but doesn’t amount to much more than “I was a little insectoid who was the smartest creature on my native planet for some reason, and then I found a crashed spaceship and put on a helmet that made me even smarter.”  None of this new background information tells us anything we didn’t already know about our villain’s powers or his motivations, or casts any illumination upon his present scheme — and so, the entire sequence doesn’t seem to have any real reason to exist, other than that Annihilus has been around since 1968 and someone at Marvel may have felt it was time he got an origin story.  Well, that, and to fill up five pages or so near the end of the issue.

And so we come to Fantastic Four #141 — an issue which, behind its John Romita cover, features the last FF story to be drawn by John Buscema, at least for a while.  Buscema’s run had begun with FF #107, just four issues following the departure of the series’ co-creator, Jack Kirby — and while he hadn’t drawn every single issue since, his assured draftsmanship had set the visual standard for the book throughout the early 1970s.  Thankfully, inker Joe Sinnott would remain on board to help provide stylistic continuity for several years to come; even so, from this point forward, and for the next few decades, the artwork on Fantastic Four would almost always seem to be reaching to recapture past glories, rather than simply continuing them (something which, we should note, had been true in regards to the series’ writing for some time — at least since Kirby’s exit, and probably even for a year or so prior to that).

Annihilus’ blast temporarily removes Reed’s powers, taking him out of the fight.  Next, the Thing leaps to the attack, but is swatted away almost carelessly by the villain.  And then, when the Torch attempts to “go nova”…

For all Ben Grimm’s bravado, his strength is to no avail against Annihilus’ tentacles, which unceremoniously dump him and his companions into a holding cell, there to cool their heels until called for…

Five action-packed panels later, the FF finally wins one.  It’s about time, amirite?

But even as these events unfold, the Fantastic Four are on their way, using the power of the Human Torch to burn a tunnel through the solid rock of a ridge that leads right up to Annihilus’ base, in hopes of catching him by surprise…

Annihilus’ remarks about how he’d hoped he was rid of Johnny and the others don’t make much sense, in the context of everything he’s said and done up to this point.  If he didn’t need to have them around for the culmination of his fiendish scheme, why tell Wyatt Wingfoot (back at the end of #140) that Wyatt and the FF were “the very crux” of his plan?  Why not simply proceed with the captives he already had — Franklin, Sue, and Miss Harkness — since it seems that Franklin is the only one he actually needs for the energy-transferral procedure?  And if he wanted to bring his old foes to the Negative Zone just so he could gloat over their defeat, why has he suddenly changed his mind?

Considering how easily Annihilus mopped the floor with our heroes earlier — not just once, but twice — Ben’s bewilderment over the suddenness of his collapse seems quite apt.  One might infer that the rapidly transforming Franklin is draining power out of Annihilus and back into himself, but it’s not at all clear, and it really should be.  Perhaps Gerry Conway has simply run out of room for explaining such things, seeing as how he has only three pages left to work with this issue, and the real climax of his story is yet to come…

Agatha Harkness doesn’t appear in the group of folks just returned to the Baxter Building — are we to infer that she and Ebony (that’s her cat) stayed behind in the Negative Zone?  There doesn’t appear to be any reason for them to do so, and of course they no longer have a home at Whisper Hill to go back to, so where did they go?  (For the record, the next time Agatha shows up — at the wedding of Crystal and Quicksilver, commemorated in Avengers #127 and Fantastic Four #150 [both published in June, 1974] — there’s no mention of where she’s been in the interim.)

Back in September, 1973, I no more believed that this was “the end of the Fantastic Four!” than you do, reading these words fifty years (and hundreds of Fantastic Four stories) later.  But my certain knowledge that nothing that my sixteen-year-old self had just read about was irrevocable (and, indeed, the Thing and the Torch would be back with the team as early as issue #144, while Medusa never left at all, and Sue had of course already left, back at the end of #130) could only mitigate the impact of #141’s concluding events, not negate them.

Could Reed Richards have made any other choice than the one he does, sacrificing his own son to save the world?  Could the rest of his family have made any other choice than the one they do in response, turning their backs on him in their grief and anger?  These, I think, are the questions that make Gerry Conway’s story remain so memorable, five decades after its original appearance, and in spite of the various problems I’ve pointed out along the way.  That’s because these are questions that, in the end, don’t submit to an objectively “right” or “wrong” answer.  Whatever you think about the ending of FF #141 is, of necessity, just as valid as what I think, and the converse is also true.  Discussing our different responses may help us understand each other’s point of view better, and our own as well — but we can never completely resolve the underlying issues… and that’s fine.

For what it’s worth, my personal take is that no, Reed couldn’t do anything other than what he does in the situation presented in our story’s closing pages.  After all, we’re given no reason whatsoever to doubt his assessment that, if Franklin reaches critical mass, he may well “kill every living creature in the solar system“, nor his conviction that there are only moments left to prevent that outcome.  And it’s not like any other option is available; after the fact, no one comes forward to say, “But Reed, why didn’t you try…?”  The others simply assume that the incredibly brilliant Mister Fantastic should have been able to find another way, which seems patently unfair.  The family’s complete rejection of Reed in the immediate aftermath of his dramatic action may be understandable, and even inevitable — everyone is clearly in shock.  But for them to continue to hold him completely responsible for what has happened to Franklin would be less than fair (as Ben and Johnny do indeed come to realize, pretty early on).

But even if all of that is true, it by no means lets Reed off the hook.  Yes, the situation he finds himself in is impossible — but it’s also a situation of his own making, at least to a certain extent.  It’s clear that Reed has been concerned about Franklin becoming a danger to himself and others for quite some time, and that he’s been conducting experiments in search of a solution at least since issue #138, and perhaps even since #134.**  But he’s shared his concerns — and his efforts — with no one, evidently feeling that it’s his duty (and perhaps, less to his credit, his prerogative) to handle things all by himself, as “the man of the family”.  Since he hasn’t asked the others for their support before now, in the moment of acute crisis he’s unable to turn to them — and so he alone is left to pull the trigger, to take the sole responsibility for the act that destroys his family.  It’s the stuff of tragedy — or it would be, if we didn’t all know, in 1973 as well as in 2023, that it’s all going to get better, sooner or later… and the smart money would be on sooner.  (Although you could make the case that things will get worse for Reed before they get better, at least on the marital front, as issue #147 will see him served with divorce papers by Sue.)

Panel from FF #147 (Jun., 1974). Text by Gerry Conway; art by Rich Buckler and Joe Sinnott.

In the same Back Issue article that I referenced earlier, Gerry Conway referred to Reed’s action in FF #141 as “the classical male thing of taking a unilateral male step”.  He also explained how he saw the Reed-Sue-Franklin storyline as a whole as reflective of what was going on in American society at that time:

I wanted to shake things up… and, to put this into historical context, too, the early ’70s was a period of tremendous upheaval in male/female relationships.  The divorce rate was skyrocketing, [and] women were really pushing to be taken seriously as equals in their relationships with men.  It was the cultural flowering of Women’s Liberation…  So that was part of the zeitgeist, and part of what we were all thinking about.

That connection with the zeitgeist, however much it was intentional rather than arrived at unconsciously, probably accounts at least in part for the particular resonance this story has held for some readers over the years.  It certainly seems to have informed the use made of it by author Rick Moody in the semi-autobiographical novel I quoted from earlier, The Ice Storm (full disclosure: I haven’t actually read the novel all the way through, though I have seen the movie).  In it, Paul Hood — the author’s stand-in — finds in the pages of his favorite comic book, Fantastic Four, both mysterious intimations of his own family life as well as an escape from it.  After thinking of various ways in which his own father is like both Ben Grimm and Reed Richards, while his mother is like both Sue Richards and Crystal, and he himself is sometimes like Ben and sometimes like Peter Parker,*** Paul concludes:

These models never worked exactly.  Still, the F.F., with all their mistakes and allegiances, their in-fighting and dependability, told some true tale about family.  When Paul started reading these books, the corny melodrama of New Canaan lost some of its sting.

That “corny melodrama”, involving casual adultery and alcohol abuse among the novel’s adults, and sexual experimentation and more general substance abuse among their kids, is, I have to say, quite remote from my own experiences of growing up in the Seventies.  The social and sexual tumults of the decade largely passed my Jackson, Mississippi Southern Baptist household by; and while I might wish that a few liberal ideas — feminism, for one — had caught root with my parents (whether in that decade, or any other), I can’t say I’m inclined to complain about growing up in a stable, loving home.  There are, I’m fairly sure, considerably worse fates.

But even if I couldn’t relate to the Fantastic Four’s familial dysfunction in the same way as could young Paul Hood (or, I’m assuming, young Rick Moody), that didn’t mean I couldn’t be just as invested in their ongoing domestic saga.  I figure that I must have been as keen as anyone else was, back in the fall of 1973, to find out what would become of Reed and Sue, not to mention poor little Franklin.  Plus, was Crystal really going to marry that jerk Quicksilver instead of Johnny?  Was Ben ever going to ask Alicia to marry him?  (Don’t answer that one.)  And just how long was Medusa planning to stick around for, anyway?  I look forward to sharing the stories that answered those questions — some of them, anyway — with you in later posts

*The scene below appears in the context of Johnny Storm, the Human Torch, having just flown off in despair over being separated from his girlfriend Crystal, who for health reasons has been forced to return to the Inhumans’ Great Refuge, far away in the Himalayas:

In the next couple of panels, Sue worries about how much everyone on the team has been irritable with one another recently, and muses, “Perhaps we’d all be better off if we had a separation for awhile!”  Just one panel after that, however, she concludes, “And yet — even the thought of being without Reed — is more than I can bear!”  And that’s that.  If Sue ever gets her apology, we don’t see it on panel; and as far as I’ve been able to determine, Stan Lee never really returns to this theme for the remainder of his run (which, following a brief interregnum, comes to its final end with issue #125).

**It’s actually possible to place the beginnings of Reed’s secret attempts to deal with the Franklin problem even earlier — as far back as issue #129, where, if you’ll remember, Reed begged off from accompanying Sue to Whisper Hill to pick up their son due to his needing to attend to “some work in the lab” — a decision that clearly heightened tensions between the couple, and helped lead to their separation at the end of #130.  Or, if you’re even more daring, you could peg it still further back — all the way back to issue #107, where Reed snapped at Sue for bothering him in his lab while he was “involved in something important“.  Not that I’m saying that either Stan Lee or Roy Thomas intended those scenes to be read that way, setting up plot points for Gerry Conway to pay off years later; on the other hand, there’s nothing to prevent one from interpreting them in such a fashion.  For this particular reader, at least, it adds even greater pathos and irony to the fall of Mister Fantastic to imagine that his misguided effort to address a serious problem concerning his child while neglecting to involve his partner, the child’s mother — a woman whom he at at least one point castigates for not being protective enough of their child — has been going on for a really long time.

***No, Spider-Man isn’t a member of the FF — at least, not in 1973.  Still, it’s amusingly ironic that Paul Hood identifies so closely with Peter Parker, seeing as how Tobey Maguire would end up playing both young men in the movies.

27 comments

  1. frednotfaith2 · September 16, 2023

    Not quite as dramatic as the ending of Spider-Man 121 just a few months earlier, but certainly another highly-charged conclusion to another issue written by Gerry Conway. My 11-year-old self was certainly stunned upon reading that final page 50 years ago. I most sympathized with Reed and couldn’t understand why none of the others could realize the predicament of the situation and that there were no good options. Of course, in hindsight, and having now read all those earlier issues, I agree with your assessment that Reed had dug himself into a hole, being too full of pride to have shared with his wife and other teammates his concern, the specific purpose of his experiments. A brilliant man with failings that were alienating himself from his wife, his child, and his friends. Simply because he didn’t trust them enough to share his fears with them.
    There were certainly tensions in my own family in 1973, although my parents didn’t break up until 1982, but there were plenty of fights and shouts and other unpleasantness. And both my parents came from “broken” families – in my mom’s case from her father dying when she was 10; in my dad’s, from his parents’ divorce when he was 10 — his family lived in a very small farming community in northeast Texas and his father had a very terrible temper, one punching my dad’s eldest brother hard enough to knock him out. My grandma loved her husband but feared that in one of his temper tantrums he might kill one of their 6 children so she finally told him to go, and so he did — that was in 1951. When grandpa showed up one day, about 6 years later, wanting to talk to my dad, then about 16, dad, as he told me, told his father to get lost and even refused the money grandpa offered him. Eventually they did reconcile, when my dad was 30 and decided that my brothers and I should at least get to know the one living grandfather we did have, even if my dad still didn’t particularly like the man, his own father.
    Of course, the fictional first family of Marvel did eventually reconcile too and have mosty been more of a “happy family” in the decades since, not even having to seriously worry about death tearing them apart since that aspect of living has become all but meaningless in their universe. Mostly a temporary unpleasantness.
    So far, I’ve never seen the film The Ice Storm or read the book, but reading your references to them make me more curious to check them both out for myself. Funny, as a kid I admittedly retreated from the world to delve into the fantasy world of comics, but still the comics that most appealed to me were those featuring characters who had difficulties. Those whom I could relate to in some ways even if their problems were very different from mine. Of course, I didn’t like too much unrelenting hardship, where everything seemed hopeless and entirely bleak. But then, I also enjoyed the dark humor of The Hitchhiker’s Guide to the Galaxy and the film Melancholia, both of which featured the actual destruction of our own little Earth. But in FF 141, Reed saved the world by shutting down the explosive mind of his own child and no one was grateful to him for the deed. But eventually, little Franklin got better, and everyone lived happily ever after. More or less.
    Loved your overview of this mag and all that led up to the dramatic conclusion, Alan!

  2. John Minehan · September 16, 2023

    Gerry Conway, no matter what his other faults or virytues may be. clearly was not a man to avoid a bold move.

    He killed of Gwen Stacey and had Reed Richards, arguably Marvel’s icon of humane, liberal science at the time, turn off his son’s mind without knowing how to turn it on again.

    Reed being a cold, uber-pragmatic emotionless figure comes out of this.

    When you think of it, Conway (who was 21 at the time) was writting Spider-Man and Thor and the Fantastic Four. he had taken over Stan Lee’s signiture work when he was about 18 years younder than Lee was when he started to create these charactors.

    Now, as bold as these moves were, he was a bit conservative in other ways. The story arcs in these books seemed influenced by what Lee had been doing about 100 issues before. Conway, as bold as he could be, never quite seemed to have Englehart or Gerber or McGregor or Kraft’s skill as a writer. Comnway never had a CPT America or a War of the World or a Man-Thing or a Man-Wolf. He wrote great stories. but never nade something his own. Even the JLA. which he wrote sporadically for ten years and continuously for about 8, produced good stories but not an era as Fox, O’Neil, Wein and Englehart had all done.

    I wonder if that was why Wein, and not Conway, became Marvel’s EIC when Roy Thomas stepped down? Someone;s sense that something was missing in Conway, as compared to Wein. Ultimatelly, no one filled Roy Thomas’s shoes (not Wein or Wolfman, or Conway or even Archie Goodwin until Jim Shooter. DC did some books, “Stan Lee creates the DC Universe,” Marvel essntially lived “Mort Weinsinger Re-Creates the Marvel Universe” for 10 years.)

    It was enough to make Conway depart for DC as an Editor (“Conway’s Corner”) and to return to become Marvel EIC (breifly). After that, he mostly avoided being an Editor.

    Sometomes things look better than they are from the outside.

    If nothing else, Gerry Conway (or a comment aboput Gerry Conway, that he felt bad about) did promt Harlan Ellison to aplologise to Conway’s mother. If you did nothing else, that was one for the record books.

  3. DontheArtistformerlyknownasfrodo628 · September 16, 2023

    No doubt about it, Reed is an a$$hole for the way he treats Sue in this story arc, but for just a second, by way of looking for a reason for this behavior rather than an excuse, let’s take a look at how unprepared Reed was for the life he’s been living.

    Reed was a nerd. No idea if he had Captain America trading cards as Phil Coulson did or not, but he was a nerd. And a science nerd, to boot. His adolesence (of which we know very little), was undoubtedly spent with his head in a book, in a lab, hunched over a chess board or helping move A/V equipment. He probably had very little chance to make friendships or even interact with the rest of humanity much beyond people who probably had as limited social skills as he did. When did he become friends with Ben? HOW did they become friends? Did they know one another in high school? Did Reed take a thorn out of Ben’s paw? To my knowledge we’ve never been told and I wonder, given how little Reed and Ben had in common, how deep and meaningful a friendship it was, not that Reed had the life experience to know one way or the other. Becoming acquaintances in college with the much-more flamboyant Victor Von Doom and competing with him for attention as the smartest one in the room was probably Reed’s first real attempt at friendship with someone he considered a peer, and a decidedly toxic one in fact.

    From there, Reed realizes his dream and is accepted into the scientific community and right away begins working on the project that led to the creation of the FF. Lee doesn’t tell us much about how Reed and Sue got together, but the guy is working for the government, is in his first real relationship with a beautiful headstrong blonde and his two best friends hate one another (I’m with Ben on this one). Add to this mix the advent of cosmic rays, the arrival of super powers, the constant danger they face as the FF, Reed’s reputation as one of the world’s smartest men, his guilt over what happened to his best-friend Ben, his betrayal by his other best friend Victor, his marriage, the birth of his son and his concern over what those pesky cosmic rays might have done to him, and frankly, I’m not surprised that Reed tries to return to that quiet isolation of his childhood where his problems were managable and he could always solve them by himself. Nothing in Reed Richard’s upbringing could have prepared him for an ordinary life, much less the one he’d been handed and quite frankly, I’m not only not surprised he could be an a$$hole from time to time, I’m surprised he never became a full-blown super-villain.

    And can you believe he’s never spent one minute in therapy? Sheesh! Comic books, y’all…

    Anyway, for the most part this was an excellent issue with excellent art from Buscema/Sinnot and a pretty cohesive story from everyone’s favorite punching bag, Gerry Conway. Thanks, Alan!

    • frasersherman · September 16, 2023

      As noted by other commenters, we’ve seen how Reed and Ben became friends. It’s common enough in college: two people get thrown together and even though they have nothing in common, they wind up bonding (been there, done that). And no, he’s not a nerd but someone who could work OSS, hold his own fighting Namor and lead the FF in combat. It’s just that over the decades we’ve embraced more a sense of tech and STEM people as being socially awkward and generally ineffective (Braniac Five becomes colder and less likeable with every Legion reboot).
      Reed and Ben weren’t friends. I think Reed giving Doom feedback was more about scientific curiosity to a guy he thought of as a potential colleague. But Doom was beyond the point of accepting anyone else’s opinion. Plus contacting his mother in the afterlife was (as retconned later) a big deal to him so I’m sure being told “this won’t work” pissed him off.

      • Marcus · September 17, 2023

        Reed was an example of the best of humanity. Smart, brave, a thinker and a doer. That’s the reason the Watcher took such an interest in him. It’s sad to see how badly Reed has been portrayed over the years since.

  4. frednotfaith2 · September 16, 2023

    Very interesting points, Don! I don’t recall reading anything showing that Reed & Victor were ever actual friends — all the flashbacks I’ve seen (from the ’60s through the mid’80s) show that by the time Victor Von Doom arrived at the university, he was already so full of himself that he was essentially incapable of becoming friends with anyone or accepting anyone as his peer or in anyway more knowledgeable than himself As per the origin in FF Annual 2, Reed offered to share a dorm room with Vic, but Vic wouldn’t have it and then Ben Grimm showed up and Reed was familiar with his football career and they took to sharing the room and that was the start of their lifelong friendship, despite that they didn’t have much in common. I think, essentially, Reed was a decent person who cared about people even if he was often too remote and kept too much to himself and sometimes had extreme tunnel vision, so focused on a goal that he discounted anything that might distract him from completing it even if it was directly related to what he was trying to do and hinted at potential dangers. He wasn’t particularly power-mad like Victor Von Doom, but sometimes too cocksure and blind to the bigger picture or potential risks.
    I think Reed wanted to be on good terms with Victor during their period in college together and he recognized him as a brilliant man although willing to delve into potentially dangerous realms of knowledge, mixing science and mysticism (maybe there were later stories that further fleshed out their university days that I’m not aware of). Insatiably curious, Reed couldn’t help but keep tabs on what Vic was up, resulting in him reading Vic’s notes on his latest experiment, noting the mathematical error and trying to bring it to Vic’s attention, only to be rudely rebuffed and ignored, whereupon Vic went ahead with results that blew up in his face and got him kicked out of the university.

    • John Minehan · September 16, 2023

      Someone like Reed, someone that intelligent and empitically diven, is probably going to be fairly open to all kinds of people, and very accepting of decent people of all kinds.

      Now, he did not handle von Doom’s math error well. He should have seen von Doom would take it as fault finding and reject the input, but this is presented as something done by a very clever college freashman and given the next chapter in his life, Reed learned.

      On the other hand, Reed is not a “warm and fuzzy” guy.Both Stan and Roy were inconsistant on that. Both gave him an avuncular streak

      Reed has the backstory of being a successful Special Operator” (at minimum, he did not get hs throat cut by politically divided Italain partisans).

      He has to have some social skills, possibly formidable ones . . . .

    • DontheArtistformerlyknownasfrodo628 · September 16, 2023

      Obviously, my memories of the young Reed Richards are hazy and completely uniformed by various retcons or what have you. Most of my response was a hot take, based on what are, admittedly stereotypical roles a science guy like Reed would embody. Regardless, Reed has always had difficulties in communicating with others and that lack of communication led, in large part, to his problems with Sue as depicted here.

  5. John Minehan · September 16, 2023

    Well, circa 1973, Reed and Ben are thrown together as roomates at (not ESU, but someplace up state, probably a stand in for Cornell or Syracuse). Both Ben and Reed are there on scholarship,(Ben for Football, Reed for academics).

    Ben is leery, assuming that he won’t be accepted. Reed accepts Ben, who is (obviously) a tough but decent and hard working guy. Reed also reaches out to the brilliant but troubled von Doom.

    Now, the “sliding time scale” changes one big thing in Reed and Ben’s back story: Ben was a USMC fighter pilot in the Pacific; Reed was an OSS Major in Italy doing Special Operations Executive-type missions with the Italian Underground,

    So, factoring all of this into the 1961-1973 Reed (as Stan, Archie, Roy and Gerry possibly didn’t), Reed is not a sheltered guy.

    He hung out with Ben Grimm, a reformed, circa 1938, Yancey Street “Gang Banger” and then went off to fight a “dirty war” where he probably had to figure out the rules for himself. He had to fight a war where he had to pick up a culture and a language quickly and forge competing groups into an effective fighting force quickly in a foregn language.

    Brave as Ben was, as difficult as the Pacific was, especially for a Marine aviator who probably started out flying inferior F2A-3 Brewster Buffalos or Grumman F4F-3/4 Wildcats during 1942, Reed might have had it worse.

    Further, there was not much help available for returning Vets in those days. Further, this was really the early days of Special Operations. Guys like Aaron Banks (and Reed in thge Marvel Universe) are figuring out the rules as they go.

    Stan Lee presented Reed as a decent, humane and optimistic man, but he also gave him a back story as a man who did a tough thankless job (to the point that an experianced Ranger Battalion Operator and later Black Side Specail operator remembers him 20 years later from serving with him in combat once), Conway may have had to square that circle,,

  6. crustymud · September 16, 2023

    I was not a fan of Conway’s work here. The kindest thing I can say about it was at least he didn’t cause irreparable damage to the strip like he did on Amazing Spider-Man.

    HOWEVER . . . a million bonus points for invoking the Ice Storm in this review, one of my most favorite movies ever. One of the few literary adaptations to actually surpass its source material. Anyone who missed it, I would highly recommended you track it down.

    • frasersherman · September 16, 2023

      It’s a fantastic film. It’s everything people thought American Beauty was but without the smugness about how it’s deconstructing suburban middle-class America.

  7. John Minehan · September 16, 2023

    Possibly, Conway inflicted the moat damage at Marvel to Daredevil, Iron Man and Sub-Mariner with the Mr. Kline story.

    It took Miller to get DD on keel and Michilinie and Layton to scrape the rust off Iron Man. Even Byrnes could not get Subby back in the swim.

    Who was deiting those books?

  8. frasersherman · September 16, 2023

    I like this arc way more than most of the commenters. And I’d pick Conway, with all his flaws, over Kraft, whom I found unreadable then and still do (YMMV, obviously).
    This presumably contributes to the “Reed is and has always been an a-hole” concept which I’ve never gotten. Basically he’s still in sixties man-of-the-house mode, protecting the little woman. Plus even Lee/Kirby’s Reed never talked about his research until it was done. From the creators’ perspective that adds drama; my head canon is that it’s less frustrating to show them what he’s built than if he has to explain it in very small words (though a counter-argument is that he usually explains it clearly when he has to).
    It’s foolish of Reed to hide things but I don’t think it’s assholeish. And he does live with the consequences here and for a while after — it’s not like (for example) Tower of Babel in JLA where Batman almost gets the League killed and nobody really calls him on how utterly stupid a teammate he was (https://atomicjunkshop.com/exactly-how-id-expect-batman-to-act-yet-it-didnt-work-tower-of-babel/)
    Conway’s use of “sub-Space” caught my eye because originally that was the dimension Annihlus and Blastaar came from while the Negative Zone was the barrier around the Great Refuge. Rereading recently I wondered if they linked the two phenomena but no. I guess once the barrier is gone they obviously decided it was too cool a name not to use.
    This story does remind me of how tame the Negative Zone became over time. When Reed first opens the door into “sub space” it’s so insanely chaotic and dangerous, going into it is near suicide. Gradually it became not terribly different from any other alien environment. A shame.

  9. Anonymous Sparrow · September 17, 2023

    I’ve always had a problem with *The Ice Storm* using this issue.

    Cover dates are not publication dates. As a rule, Marvel cover dates were three months after the comics arrived on the stands: “The End of the Fantastic Four” (also the title of *F.F.* #9, in 1962, for what it’s worth) may have had a “December” cover date, but I read it in September 1973. By Thanksgiving, the group would be picking itself up, dusting itself off and starting all over again, and greater concerns would be:

    While we know why Doctor Doom would want revenge on Reed Richards, what exactly did he have against Coach Sam Thorne?

    If Coach Thorne could get Wyatt Wingfoot to get suited up for one football game (which Crystal and Lockjaw interrupted in *F.F.* #61), why couldn’t he get him to do it for another?

    Whatever happened to Whitey Mullins? Did he follow in the path of another Marvel football player, Eugene “Flash” Thompson, and go into the Army?

    The opening page of *F.F.* #142 (“No Friend Beside Him”) has burned itself into my brain. I may not be able to wiggle my ears as well as Willie Lumpkin, but like Fred Derry for Homer Parrish in “The Best Years of Our Lives,” I’ll stand up for you ’til I drop, Reed.

    • Alan Stewart · September 17, 2023

      I agree that the odds of Paul Hood being able to buy a copy of FF #141 off the rack during his Thanksgiving break are pretty poor (though I suppose it’s at least possible he could have). It’s almost certainly an error on author Rick Moody’s part; a reminder that literary authors can make mistakes just like their comics-writing brethren.

      • Marcus · September 18, 2023

        It’s definitely possible. I remember being pleasantly surprised by finding a copy of E-Man #1 with the new comics after having bought issue #5. No idea how that happened exactly, but happy it did.

    • drhaydn · September 19, 2023

      A bit of FF trivia: Coach Sam Thorne was originally named Jim Thorpe (see FF 51, pages 11-12). I guess either Stan or Jack realized that name was already taken and changed it accordingly.

      • Anonymous Sparrow · September 20, 2023

        Thank you for pointing that out!

        It was also in *The Fantastic Four* that Bruce Banner became Robert Bruce Banner, as we see in #25, when the caption boxes refer to him as “Bob Banner.” And if I remember correctly, in *Avengers* #2, Rick Jones tells the Hulk (actually the Space Phantom) that his secret identity is Dr. Don Blake. (By the bristling beard of Odin, no!)

        The real Jim Thorpe played football against a future President (Dwight Eisenhower) in 1912. Maybe Sam Thorne incurred the wrath of the future King of Latveria on the playing field, and Victor’s long memory wouldn’t allow him to forget it.

        Simon Savage joked about growing a beard when John Kennedy, skipper of the PT 109, would run for President. (See *Captain Savage and His Battlefield Raiders* #14.)

  10. marco · September 18, 2023

    I had forgotten how good the Buscema- Sinnott art on these issues was. Sinnott in my opinion was at his peak from ’72 to ’75. Beautiful stuff!!
    As to the plot-line….it seems that Roy as editor and sometimes author wanted to shake up all the relationships…starting with Namor and Dorma, Peter and Gwen and Reed and Sue. Marvel back-tracked on Reed and Sue….maybe because of the backlash received from killing off Gwen, or Stan getting cold feet!.
    It is a fascinating period for Marvel….when the top titles were interesting ( FF, Spidey, Avengers, Cap, Conan, Hulk) and the ‘B’ titles extraordinary ( Capt Marvel, Dr Strange, Tomb of D, Man-Thin and ‘soon’ Jungle Action, Killraven, Warlock, Defenders, Guardians of the Galaxy, Master of Kung Fu). Roy’s laissez-faire policy, plus great skill in picking writers, paid great dividends for what I think is Marvel’s second golden age.
    By the way Alan, you no longer appear to have been buying any Kirby comics since the end of the 4th World. Do you feel that Kirby had been left behind by the writing revolution happening over at Marvel? I personally loved both Kamandi and the Demon.

  11. slangwordscott · September 24, 2023

    I simply don’t get the Conway dislike some display. He clearly wrote some stories that meant something lasting to the readers, and that’s more than some writers ever do.

    Even though the title lived in the shadow of Kirby and Lee, I appreciate now that Conway and Thomas tried to add some personality-driven drama to the proceedings. Yes, I didn’t like seeing the FF split apart, but I kept buying to see what would happen. I’m sure I wasn’t the only 8/9 year old that got hooked at that time.

    At any rate I do recognize that mileages vary, and that older readers in particular may have felt it discordant.

  12. lordsinclair · September 27, 2023

    Great article and responses, but about that cover: do atomic bombs actually glow?

  13. John Minehan · September 27, 2023

    Not in storage, at least . . . .

  14. Bill Nutt · November 26, 2023

    Great job summarizing Conway’s work on FF up to this point, Alan!

    I’ve never read Rick Moody’s book, but I keep meaning to. The movie is superb and shows that Ang Lee is one versatile director.

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